Shannon's+Egypt

Emily- Professional Mourner Shannon-Carrier of the sarcouphagus Deepa-audience thing ~Hailey~** = = =got it!~Shannon*=
 * Hi everyone it's me Hailey i just wanted to make sure everybody in this group is ok with their part and knows what they are doing!

Emily- Here is what I have, you 2 may want to save your work on word just in case, you can add to mine if you want-

Shannon- I really like what you did but being my self I thought of a few sentences while reading it. Anything I added on is written in bold letters! Also, you are reading it durring our presentation right emily? and then me and deepa will be mourners, and we can hire a few other people to mourn also, I was thinking of mabye, Kristina, Rachael, (mabye hailey) and Jess! what do you think?

Emily- I love how you changed it, especially the sentence on the new ruler, i didnt know how to word it so i left it out--im SOOO glad u put it in, if you dont mind (which i hope u dont) im going to bold it all since it is OUR work and i im a viual learner and if part is bolded it is kind of confusing (sry), u or deepa can reed it if u want but im not verry good at mourning, i had some good idea's ill tell u tmrw. cul8r

Shannon~ OK that's great! but I'm going to add my paragraph at the bottem of the page! Oh and by the way, I think our mummy is comming allong great! also I was thinking, mabye, we should hire (that sounds funny //**we**// are going to hire someone!) two guys carry our mummy in, you know like at funerals! lol! What do you think?

Emily- in class tdy did i tell u bout the v thing (im pretty sure i told u shannon but i think i forgot to tell deepa) v=victory, the three of us, u 2 in the front me in the back....whatever, it was just a thought DEEPA PLEASE BRING IN THE POSTR BOARD IF U SEE THIS

Deepa- Im gonna add sum things but i'll leave in italic font so u guys know an so far i think u guys really did a GREAT job!! i was thinking to start it off by sumthin like this is the body of or sumthin like tht and idk if we shud add this but i kno tht seth had many forms of different animals...shud i add tht?? Sure but put in a paragraph form and ill ad on to it!~Shannon

Deepa- I dont have tht much to add.. only a few sentences...is tht ok, cuz im gonna get onlater when im done the rest of the hmwrk...i didnt delete anythingggggggg

Shannon~ Hey Deepa the one sentence you put, "Demilion fought the snake like monster, Apep, every night." is a great sentence but mabye we shouldn't have him fight him every night, mabye he should have one great battle with him. We could also add that to my paragraph that I started at the bottem and I added some of your sentences to it!

Emily~ I LOVE it, great job deepa (its still here) and shannon, i added some stuff and its underlined, ill save this on word and print it out, you may want to do the same if you change anything so we have the most recent form for tmrw, i figured out how to make the boxes and i think they will look great, i fixed some grammer stuff.hope you dont mind if u do im really sorry,i may come on later but im not sure, u guys are such a great group!!!! p.s.--i have more ideas (for the way to show he was evil)and did you ever notice demilion sounds like dominion? :D GO DIMILION!!! Shannon~ I can't say i disagree! I //**LOVE**// our group! We work great as a team! GO DEMILION!!!! :D LOL!

===Deepa- i cant print it cuz my printer is acting dumb so yea...and how many poster boards shud i bring in 2mrrw. r u gonna bring in the boxes 2mrrw...cant wait to see them...great job u guys...i luv the part tht emily added..do u guys wanna add sumthin like he was the son of blah blah blah... jus let me kno===

Emily- I would bring in one for tmrw...i havent made the boxes---dont know size, color, etc..., im going to add a title..remember 2 read through it and see if you like it, i had the idea of an angry mob against him what do you think.... GO DIMILION :D

Shannon~ Hey guys sorry it's kinda late but I had soccer pratice so i figured I might as well check who's on, anyway, I added a few things to the second paragraph, what ever I added is in bold and underlined to make it easier!

Deepa~ wht do u mean by an angry mob....like add it in the eulogy or wht ...im cunfused=] c u in skool

Shannon~ Hey Deepa don't forget to wear black on Monday!

Emily~ why was rachael k editing our page?

Deepa~ i think sumthin is wrong w/ the wiki cuz im the one who did tht editting and it came under rachael k's name...thts weird anywayz... instead of buying brown posterboard i bought gold posterboard cuz we have gold on the mummy and i think it will look better...wht do u think??? and srry, i couldnt paint it myself cuz i jus came back an i have to go to my aunts house so i just bought the gold kind but i think it will look good


 * EMILY___COULD SOMEBODY PLEASE WRITE SOMETHING ON THE DO IT OR PAY AND THE EPS (see below)!!!---(i feel really bad b/c i wrote a lot...sry)__**

Deepa~ r u gonna be able to bring the cloth to cover our heads, shannon??????????
REMEMBER THIS HAS TO HAVE POLITICAL ECONONOMICAL AND SOCIAL ON THE NEW KINGDOM AND TELL THE NEW DIETY THETHREE SYMBOLS AND HIS FAVORITE DIETY!!! WEAR BLACK


 * //__AS OF 6:49 ON SUNDAY NIGHT I TOOK THIS AS THE FINAL DRAFT, EDITED IT AND PRINTED IT. IF THEIR ARE ANY CHANGES PLEASE TELL ME AT SCHOOL. THNX...Emily GO DEMILION :D__//**

//Here lays the body of a great and powerful king, Demilion////.// (Angry mob enters) **Demilion was a king of great control for twenty-five years. He cared for his people and worked to instill peace. Though he was strict, he brought success to our city. Sometimes war was waged with the east while at other times our empire's walls were improved. Occasionally, he was brutal but he made sure we all had the bare necessities of life. He could be compared to Gilgamesh before his encounter with his other half.** **He valued his people as workers and made sure they were always working their hardest.**
 * //__My God, My Pharaoh, My Father__//**

//Demilion fought the snake-like monster, Apep, yearly. This battle left him bruised and battered but it was his duty to keep Maat in balance. He also protected Re during his journey to the underworld. This was a dangerous task that very few could have done.// **Our city was the most powerful, and our people also worked their hardest during his reign. Demilion was the one to first to speak to the all-powerful Amon-re. He also worked us extremely hard, day and night, to build the best temple in Amon-Re’s honor.** **He idolized Thutmose III for his warrior behavior and strived to be just like him. We as a city feel he met his lifetime goal. Demilion worked to decrease importation and increase exportation as to save money and to show scorn towards Hatshepsut, whom he despised.** Trade was her seed in the plant of Egypt and Demilion wished only to uproot it. **We now have started to grow more crops and make more things for ourselves and sell the surplus to far away places for a hefty price. I may be the new ruler, but Demilion will always be remembered. This caring pharaoh improved our city in many ways and worked with an iron fist.** //The things he did were to help us.//


 * Demilion taught our village how to stand on our own. He made our people work harder than they ever did before!** He united our people and made us a working community. **Sure, some said he worked us too hard, but it was just that which made our city what it is today. We believe that his cruel punishments kept our city in order and up and running! Once again all of the things Demilion did were for us!** And let's not forget Demilion's famous final battle against Apep. Demilion fought and fought and was about to give up, until he thought of his city and his people. This thought gave him strength and power, enough strength to get back up and enough power to kill Apep. Demilion sometimes took forms of different animals such as a lion and a snake. He used these to protect his people and his city. We believe that he was Amon-Re's son and will control all the land for the rest of eternity. We send our thanks to him in the Field of Reeds above. Please bring mercy to the city which you unified in your human form. You have shaped and formed us and we will never forget the many things you did for us. From your Ka up above I hope that you see this royal ceremony in honor of you from your beloved city below. **He will be buried in this very special “House of Gold” which we all have worked very hard to build for the past twenty-five years of his reign. (Pause to cry)**

As those before this beautiful sarcophagus may see, there are three symbols inscribed upon it. The headpiece shows Nebu, the sign of gold. It is not only the flesh of our gods but the symbol of the polished sun as well. Demilion devoted his life to the fireball above our heads. The Flail and Crook is the royal sign of majesty and shows supreme power over the dominion. Was is similar to this but is also a sign of war. During war it was this scepter, held by the deities and great kings before him, that insured domination and victory.

Throughout his life he also created a new deity, besides Amon-Re. This was the lion. Its name was Loatheth and he was extremely strong and powerful. He symbolized control and there are many reasons as to the creation behind his great power. His mane is the outlining rays of the sun as it rises above the horizon. The lion is the biggest and strongest of all cats. Loatheth was the king of the jungle and one of the kings of the world. His face was sculpted into the Sphinx to show power and control as well. It is my belief that Loatheth is actually my father, Demilion.

Throughout my father's life he worshiped Seth. He was the son of Net and Geb and brother to Osirus. This god, portrayed as an armadillo, may have been considered evil to some but Demilion considered him to be an ingenious god. Seth must have been strong to outwit the great Osirus. Though he may have been outplayed by Osirus's son, Seth still competes for victory today. This shows great acts of determination.

I would appreciate it if we could all bow our heads in peace now for a moment of silence. (Wait five seconds) I would just like to say thank you for your concern and thank you for coming.